Looking back on the project 2 I have immediately noticed that my starting frame is wide frame of fighting crowd (even it is
smaller part of the painting). I think the starting point of the story would be
more interesting not to show the whole scene of fight but some closer frames of
fighting man, their moving legs, fighting guns, shooting guns etc. I think by
this we can capture more attention of audience. They should ask themselves what
is going here, why there is a fighting, I want to know more (just my opinion).
The mise-en-scene, a very important person is injured and others are trying /
looking to help him. We see a battle, we see red uniforms - so maybe British
army, there is an 'Indian', so it is on America continent.
I did not use whole painting as wide frame
but I think it could be good as an end of the sequence now. I think that I
could put the frame with the detail of injured body two position further. To
hide on what the people are looking e.g.
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