Wednesday, 18 September 2013
the first cut: we get all information and the feeling is that Harry is entering the building on the right CUT and we are with him in a lift.
the second cut: Harry is leaving the lift - space of a floor is introduced. A while before a cut we hear "Hi Harry" CUT and we see Harry is taking off his macintosh. The cut works even we saw Harry's back and after the CUT he is standing in front of camera! Motivation: Off Screen Sound ("Hi Harry")
the third: Harry is turning on the equipment and we hear "Listen" CUT and we see his assistant who is reading a part of an article.
the fourth: The assistant is continuing in reading and when he is finishing a movement of scratching his face CUT we see a hand searching photographs. It looks that the CUT works well because there was unfinished movement in the cut before. We see Harry is touching something by his right hand. The scratching movement is not motivation because I tried to cut before the assistant is scratching his face and the CUT worked also. The motivation is maybe a rhythm and we continue to see something what was motivated before. Harry is looking on photographs.
the fifth: initially I did no notice it but across the CUT we hear "listen this" says assistant CUT and we see Harry is looking down on the photographs. I tried to shorten / prolong the cut but it did not work! It was disturbing cut - there is the off screen sound motivation.
the sixth: still we can hear the assistant - it is the motivation to make a CUT to see him as he is still reading.
the seventh: The assistant finished the article. After when he rose up his eyes from magazine to Harry, he is looking off screen at Harry and immediately is making a grimace and there is a CUT to Harry's hands searching photographs. Motivation: looking of screen. I tried to cut after the assistant rose up his eyes and it worked only when the cut was made before the grimace.
the ninth: Off screen motivation - Harry is looking at the photograph - ("Do you want some coffee?" said the assistant in the second frame)
the tenth: Sound off screen - there is a sound of assistant's steps
the eleventh: Stanley is waiting for an answer from Harry - it looks like it was motivation for cut here. Before Stanley started to pour coffee he was looking at Harry but the cut was prolonged. I tried to cut when Stanley is looking at Harry and it worked.
the twelfth: Off Screen Action
the thirteenth: Rhythm
the fourteenth: Off Screen - Stanley is looking in Harry's position.
the fifteenth: Off screen action, Harry is waiting on beep sound mark on tape to synchronize the three recorders.
the seventeenth: Off screen looking
the eighteenth: we can hear the recorded audio and the CUT is motivated by off screen action as Harry is tuning the equipment which controls the three audio players.
the nineteenth: Harry turned off the audio track A and B and tuned only audio track C (City Paris unit) the CUT is motivated by the action.
the twentieth: motivation is probably rhythm because we can see the unit recording the audio and CUT we can see a couple which is recorded.
the twenty-first: we can hear that the recorded audio is loosing its quality CUT and we can see Harry at the desk. I like where the editor made the cut. The couple are hidden behind a figure. The interesting thing is also where the CUT begins - Harry has his eyes closed.
the twenty-second: Cutting on the movement, As Harry is putting his hands on equipment there is CUT to shot which is finishing the movement.
the twenty-third: Harry turned off the track C and tuned up the track A and the CUT is showing us a man who is carrying the unit A - shopping bag.
the twenty-fourth: there is same pattern as it was at the unit C. Harry - Unit - The couple.
the twenty-fifth: the last shot is ending at Harry and CUT we are back at his work.
the twenty-sixth: Harry is looking on the recorder
the twenty-seventh: the motivation is the dialogue
the twenty-eighth: the sound is getting worse, the camera moved from A to B recorder.
the twenty-ninth: the motivation is to show the unit B
the thirtieth: from unit B to the equipment
the thirtieth-first: from the equipment to the photograph
the thirtieth-second: from the photograph to Harry who is looking at it.
the thirtieth-third: Harry is looking of screen at the recorders
the thirtieth-fourth: Harry is looking off screen at the recorders and after
the thirtieth-fifth: he is looking off screen at loudspeaker
the thirtieth-sixth: we see wide shot and ...........
the thirtieth-seventh: we are going to another sequence