Here is the result:
Robert's comment: It's 100% better. Quite professional, flows well and you've put the pieces together coherently. Only a few English errors (during) but these are minor. Well done.
Monday, 19 May 2014
Assigment 4 Re-edited
My tutor recommended me to re-edit the final assignment. His critique was mainly about the narrative and wrong English: I did have some trouble following your narrative and your English
subtitles though. Robert also proposed me his structure which I could follow and make the story more clear.
Here is the result:
Robert's comment: It's 100% better. Quite professional, flows well and you've put the pieces together coherently. Only a few English errors (during) but these are minor. Well done.
Here is the result:
Robert's comment: It's 100% better. Quite professional, flows well and you've put the pieces together coherently. Only a few English errors (during) but these are minor. Well done.
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