Sunday 24 March 2013

Exercise: Two people communicating

3 comments:

  1. Hi Emil,

    Everything in the suggested script is here, you have caught the recognition in the faces and there is definitely communication there. I like, short simple and to the point.

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  2. Hi Emil
    I agree with Richard. Your film shows the two people communicating even though they are not on screen together. You have definitely shown a friendly communication between them
    Hope all is going well for you
    Margaret

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  3. Yes, it's obvious who's talking to who here. I also like the way you composed each actor so that they were towards the side of the frame, looking towards the opposite side.


    Stuart

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