Hi Emil,Everything in the suggested script is here, you have caught the recognition in the faces and there is definitely communication there. I like, short simple and to the point.
Hi EmilI agree with Richard. Your film shows the two people communicating even though they are not on screen together. You have definitely shown a friendly communication between themHope all is going well for youMargaret
Yes, it's obvious who's talking to who here. I also like the way you composed each actor so that they were towards the side of the frame, looking towards the opposite side.Stuart