Everything in the suggested script is here, you have caught the recognition in the faces and there is definitely communication there. I like, short simple and to the point.
Hi Emil I agree with Richard. Your film shows the two people communicating even though they are not on screen together. You have definitely shown a friendly communication between them Hope all is going well for you Margaret
Yes, it's obvious who's talking to who here. I also like the way you composed each actor so that they were towards the side of the frame, looking towards the opposite side.
Hi Emil,
ReplyDeleteEverything in the suggested script is here, you have caught the recognition in the faces and there is definitely communication there. I like, short simple and to the point.
Hi Emil
ReplyDeleteI agree with Richard. Your film shows the two people communicating even though they are not on screen together. You have definitely shown a friendly communication between them
Hope all is going well for you
Margaret
Yes, it's obvious who's talking to who here. I also like the way you composed each actor so that they were towards the side of the frame, looking towards the opposite side.
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