Saturday, 6 July 2013

Re-edited Assignment 3

The main Robert's (tutor) critique was about narrative - the story structure. Robert encouraged me to re-edit the story and I agreed after a great phone discussion. I realized that I did not conveyed some issues about the story in original edit. Here is the re-edited version but I was not able to make it within 90 second:


  1. Hi Emil

    I've just watched both edits of your film and yes, the second version is more complete. I get a better sense of what the narrative is now. It also makes me want to know what happens next!

  2. Great stuff. I love the darkness of the shots - all very creepy. Well done!